From afabab5ec7a8d8500576a3bf39321cb5ca566661 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Arnold D. Robbins" Date: Tue, 4 Nov 2014 08:26:46 +0200 Subject: Add NOTES. --- NOTES | 9 +++++++++ 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+) create mode 100644 NOTES (limited to 'NOTES') diff --git a/NOTES b/NOTES new file mode 100644 index 00000000..9fb5f5dc --- /dev/null +++ b/NOTES @@ -0,0 +1,9 @@ +Page 18. OK to move the sidebar although having it at the opening +is sort of like the opening quotes I have in other places; it's meant +to be humorous. + +Page 10 - references to 'Chapter 10' and 'Chapter 11' have been left +alone since they are links and I can't do it that way in texinfo anyway. + +Appendices vs. Appendixes - I have left it as the former; the latter +looks totally wrong to me. -- cgit v1.2.3 From 0a0442fb4744b4a6f419b5e341dfb553081cf04e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Arnold D. Robbins" Date: Fri, 7 Nov 2014 14:25:42 +0200 Subject: More copyedits. --- NOTES | 2 ++ 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+) (limited to 'NOTES') diff --git a/NOTES b/NOTES index 9fb5f5dc..aa3d1890 100644 --- a/NOTES +++ b/NOTES @@ -7,3 +7,5 @@ alone since they are links and I can't do it that way in texinfo anyway. Appendices vs. Appendixes - I have left it as the former; the latter looks totally wrong to me. + +At page 104. -- cgit v1.2.3 From 0ef2d77362b1ac3caae96512c0dbdcda5b87adc5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Arnold D. Robbins" Date: Sun, 9 Nov 2014 06:33:30 +0200 Subject: Copyedits. --- NOTES | 10 +++++++++- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'NOTES') diff --git a/NOTES b/NOTES index aa3d1890..7e707c83 100644 --- a/NOTES +++ b/NOTES @@ -8,4 +8,12 @@ alone since they are links and I can't do it that way in texinfo anyway. Appendices vs. Appendixes - I have left it as the former; the latter looks totally wrong to me. -At page 104. +Numbers. I use the style where values from zero to nine are spelled +out and from 10 up they're written with digits. I forget what the +Chicago Manual of Style calls this. So I've rejected those changes. + +C heads - I have not lowercased them; this would be incorrect +for the Texinfo, so I've marked them as Rejected but with a reply +in the PDF to please do this during production. + +At page 149, before 'the do-while statement'. -- cgit v1.2.3 From 67557ccd7bfedd6656394c42b367493f6eba0bdb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Arnold D. Robbins" Date: Mon, 10 Nov 2014 06:22:54 +0200 Subject: Copyedits. --- NOTES | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'NOTES') diff --git a/NOTES b/NOTES index 7e707c83..00eec27c 100644 --- a/NOTES +++ b/NOTES @@ -16,4 +16,4 @@ C heads - I have not lowercased them; this would be incorrect for the Texinfo, so I've marked them as Rejected but with a reply in the PDF to please do this during production. -At page 149, before 'the do-while statement'. +At page 191. -- cgit v1.2.3 From b027c0d5d49cddfb46565d2d572ecf3828b80b1a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Arnold D. Robbins" Date: Tue, 11 Nov 2014 06:22:26 +0200 Subject: Copyedits. --- NOTES | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'NOTES') diff --git a/NOTES b/NOTES index 00eec27c..85b8fda9 100644 --- a/NOTES +++ b/NOTES @@ -16,4 +16,4 @@ C heads - I have not lowercased them; this would be incorrect for the Texinfo, so I've marked them as Rejected but with a reply in the PDF to please do this during production. -At page 191. +At page 222. -- cgit v1.2.3 From d4397f45eb710a3c24b7b24aa895e8b9323aff4f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Arnold D. Robbins" Date: Wed, 12 Nov 2014 22:29:14 +0200 Subject: Copyedits. Through Part II. --- NOTES | 15 ++++++++++----- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'NOTES') diff --git a/NOTES b/NOTES index 85b8fda9..f4181d82 100644 --- a/NOTES +++ b/NOTES @@ -5,15 +5,20 @@ to be humorous. Page 10 - references to 'Chapter 10' and 'Chapter 11' have been left alone since they are links and I can't do it that way in texinfo anyway. -Appendices vs. Appendixes - I have left it as the former; the latter +Appendices vs. Appendixes: I have left it as the former; the latter looks totally wrong to me. -Numbers. I use the style where values from zero to nine are spelled -out and from 10 up they're written with digits. I forget what the -Chicago Manual of Style calls this. So I've rejected those changes. +Numbers: I use the style where values from zero to nine are spelled +out and from 10 up they're written with digits. (I forget what the +Chicago Manual of Style calls this.) So I've rejected those changes. C heads - I have not lowercased them; this would be incorrect for the Texinfo, so I've marked them as Rejected but with a reply in the PDF to please do this during production. -At page 222. +Literal layout blocks not being indented - I used literal layout to get +the brackets, which indicate optional stuff, in Roman. I think that if you +simply fix the style sheets to indent those blocks, we should be in better +shape. + +At page 321. -- cgit v1.2.3 From 6cc74b6a9954bcfcf48aeb6178b3426b5940f928 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Arnold D. Robbins" Date: Fri, 14 Nov 2014 13:52:05 +0200 Subject: Copyedits, through Chapter 14. --- NOTES | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'NOTES') diff --git a/NOTES b/NOTES index f4181d82..c5c1094a 100644 --- a/NOTES +++ b/NOTES @@ -21,4 +21,4 @@ the brackets, which indicate optional stuff, in Roman. I think that if you simply fix the style sheets to indent those blocks, we should be in better shape. -At page 321. +At page 373. -- cgit v1.2.3 From bfb15f15556411332a2c33c2ddf51ca44c7df82f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Arnold D. Robbins" Date: Sat, 15 Nov 2014 20:47:03 +0200 Subject: Through page 436. --- NOTES | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'NOTES') diff --git a/NOTES b/NOTES index c5c1094a..12b6e502 100644 --- a/NOTES +++ b/NOTES @@ -21,4 +21,6 @@ the brackets, which indicate optional stuff, in Roman. I think that if you simply fix the style sheets to indent those blocks, we should be in better shape. -At page 373. +For me to think about: Page 396, where there's a full sentence in bold. + +At page 438. -- cgit v1.2.3 From c55f68090438121e3bb7c4baa66d5bba6681f277 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Arnold D. Robbins" Date: Sun, 16 Nov 2014 21:18:36 +0200 Subject: Through p. 482. --- NOTES | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) (limited to 'NOTES') diff --git a/NOTES b/NOTES index 12b6e502..f7dee5ca 100644 --- a/NOTES +++ b/NOTES @@ -21,6 +21,6 @@ the brackets, which indicate optional stuff, in Roman. I think that if you simply fix the style sheets to indent those blocks, we should be in better shape. -For me to think about: Page 396, where there's a full sentence in bold. +ADD STUFF ON danfuzz repo. -At page 438. +At page 482. -- cgit v1.2.3