Copyedits. Through Part II.

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@@ -5,15 +5,20 @@ to be humorous.
 Page 10 - references to 'Chapter 10' and 'Chapter 11' have been left
 alone since they are links and I can't do it that way in texinfo anyway.
 
-Appendices vs. Appendixes - I have left it as the former; the latter
+Appendices vs. Appendixes:  I have left it as the former; the latter
 looks totally wrong to me.
 
-Numbers. I use the style where values from zero to nine are spelled
-out and from 10 up they're written with digits. I forget what the
-Chicago Manual of Style calls this. So I've rejected those changes.
+Numbers: I use the style where values from zero to nine are spelled
+out and from 10 up they're written with digits. (I forget what the
+Chicago Manual of Style calls this.) So I've rejected those changes.
 
 C heads - I have not lowercased them; this would be incorrect
 for the Texinfo, so I've marked them as Rejected but with a reply
 in the PDF to please do this during production.
 
-At page 222.
+Literal layout blocks not being indented - I used literal layout to get
+the brackets, which indicate optional stuff, in Roman.  I think that if you
+simply fix the style sheets to indent those blocks, we should be in better
+shape.
+
+At page 321.